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Monday, August 17, 2020

Fragments - Monique Martin


   2013; 242 pages.  Book 3 (out of 11) in the “Out of Time” series.  New Author? : No.  Genres : Time Travel; Romance.  Overall Rating : 7*/10.

 

    It’s kind of neat to see a coworker’s picture in the newspaper.  In this case, it’s Evan Eldridge one of Elizabeth West’s and Professor Simon Cross’s colleagues.

 

    The picture is from September 18, 1942.  You can’t really call it “old” because Evan, Elizabeth, and Simon all are time travelers, and members of something called "The Council for Temporal Studies".  Indeed, Evan’s wife Lillian is waiting for him to "return home" to San Francisco in 1906.

 

    Well, it’s good to see Evan’s alive and well.  Except that he isn’t.  The caption that accompanies his photograph reads “Some men lose more than their homes.  For some, their identities are stolen by shell shock induced amnesia.”

 

    Hmm.  Evan was undoubtedly on a mission for the Council at the time, and apparently something went horribly wrong.  His amnesia explains why he’s late in getting back to Lillian, and why he’s a patient at Guy’s Hospital in London, England, a city which, in September 1942, was subject to nightly bombings by the German Luftwaffe.

 

    Someone should go rescue him.  Someone like Simon and Elizabeth.

 

What’s To Like...

    Fragments is the third novel in Monique Martin’s time-travel/romance series titled “Out of Time”.  I’ve been reading the tales in order so far, partly because I bought Books 1 through 3 as a bundle.  The two earlier novels were set in 1929 New York and 1906 San Francisco; now for the first time our protagonists are going to experience living in a war zone.

 

    There are three main plot threads to follow.  Simon and Elizabeth need to figure out what Evan's mission was in 1942 London, and since they’re “freelancing”, they can’t expect the Council for Temporal Studies to provide any information.  If/When they figure out what his assignment was, they need to complete it for him, and after that, somehow spring him from Guy’s Hospital and reunite him with Lillian.  His amnesia seems just a bit too coincidental, so it’s reasonable to expect that there will be some baddies to contend with.

 

    This is my favorite setting so far in the series.  I liked the realistic "feel" of being in London with its nightly bombings, barrage balloons, strictly-enforced blackouts, and all sorts of foreign secret agents scampering around spying on each other and engaging in skullduggery.  I also liked that there was an “is it natural or supernatural” aspect to the quest.  There’s only about a dozen or so major characters to follow, and the most noteworthy one of them, Jack, will soon be “promoted” by Monique Martin into having his very own series.

 

    I learned a new way to apologize in French: “Il s’aggissait d’un accident.  Sa chaussure.  Erreur.”  You also get to learn smidgens of Latvian and what I presume is Albanian.  When’s the last time you saw those two languages worked into a story?  The inclusion of a couple of German expressions, (Wunderhubsch and Scheisse) was not surprising since you know full well some German spies will be skulking around in London.

 

    Rudolf Hess gets a brief mention, so does Glenn Miller and Richard Wagner's Der Ring des Nibelungen.  If you're not reading this series in order, that's okay, there’s a brief backstory giving the highlights of the first two books in the series early on.  Since I was reading them from a bundle,  the book location references are given relative to the 3-book bundling.

 

    The ending is decent, with some excitement and the main thread (freeing Evan) completely resolved.  The baddies get their just deserts, although I wouldn’t be surprised to see some of them resurface in later books.  Jack gets to initiated into the art of time-traveling, which of course is a prerequisite for jumping into his own series.  The Epilogue left a lump in my throat.

 

Kewlest New Word ...

Bedsits (n., plural.) : one-room apartments typically consisting of a combined bedroom and sitting room with cooking facilities.  (a Britishism)

 

Excerpts...

    “This is different,” she said.

    Simon narrowed his eyes.

    “It is.  First of all, we didn’t leave him in the past.  He was part of the future when we were in the past and now that we’re in the future, he’s part of our past, but it isn’t the same past, so it doesn’t count.”

    “Elizabeth.”

    “Don’t ‘Elizabeth’ me right now.”  (loc. 8130)

 

    A few more regulars came in and joined the old man.  One of them leaned over to their table and said, “These dirty of sods want to know if you’re married.”

    “I am,” Elizabeth said, wiggling her ring finger and eliciting groans from the men.  She giggled.  “You all are so handsome, surely you’ve been snatched up.”

    The old man raised his glass.  “Lost me wife in ’38.”

    “I’m sorry,” Elizabeth said.

    “Every night,” he said, “I be praying the old bat don’t find me.”  (loc. 9829)

 

Kindle Details…

    Fragments presently sells for $2.99 at Amazon.  Book 1, Out of Time, is free, and Book 2, When The Walls Fell, is also $2.99.  The rest of the books in the series are $3.99 apiece.  Alternatively, you can get Books 1-3 in a bundle for $4.99.

 

Things that sound dirty but aren’t…

    “It wasn’t every day she got to fork a Nazi spy.”

 

“You know, for a comedy, The Divine Comedy is not a lot of laughs.”  (loc. 7894 )

    The quibbles are negligible.  I never did figure out how the Germans knew Simon was a professor.  If this wasn’t an oversight on my part, then the Council for Temporal Studies has a leak.  Also, the fact that two penumbral eclipses (aka "lunar eclipses") occur within a couple days of each other seems to me unlikely from an astronomy point of view, although I’m not motivated to check this out to confirm things.

 

    Some of the plot threads, including the “natural or supernatural” question, are not fully tied up, but commenting further on this would involve spoilers.  Let’s just say that Evan’s mission may or may not have been completely resolved.  But perhaps this is addressed again at some later point in the series.

 

    There’s a bit of cussing, but not much, and seems mostly limited to variations of “hell” and “damn”.  I think it says something about the author’s writing skills that she doesn’t have to resort to “shock talk” much to tell a fascinating tale.

 

    I think Fragments is my favorite book in the series so far.  Maybe it was because of the wartime setting.  Maybe it was because the time-travel aspect took precedence over the romance.  Maybe Monique Martin’s writing is just getting better with each book.  All I know is that it was fun to read.

 

    7 Stars.  I chuckled at the brief mention of the difference between the “London Bridge” and the “Tower Bridge”.  The image most people think when they hear the first term actually applies to the second one.  I know this because I lived for a short time in Lake Havasu City, Arizona way back when it was first getting started.  Its developer, Robert McCulloch, went to London and spent a bunch of money buying the London Bridge.  He thought he was getting the one was those fabulous towers and drawbridge.  Instead he got the plain-jane one, which you can see if you ever visit Lake Havasu.

Tuesday, January 14, 2020

When The Walls Fell - Monique Martin


    2013; 260 pages.  Book 2 (out of 11) of the “Out of Time” series.  New Author? : No.  Genre : Time-Travel; Romance; Whodunit.  Overall Rating : 5*/10.

    Ah yes, Temporal Paradoxes.  They're the reason the CFTS ("Council For Temporal Studies") warns every one of its time travelers not to change anything when they journey back into the past.  You never know when you might change history through even the smallest act.

    But now the CFTS wants Professor Simon Cross to go back to 1906 San Francisco and stop someone from murdering a man named Victor Graham.  It seems that one of the current council members, Charles Graham, a descendant of Victor’s, has disappeared, and the council believes this was due to somebody creating a temporal paradox by killing Victor.

    Simon has his doubts about the mission.  The council may have ulterior motives, although what those might be is anybody’s guess.  So the CFTS switches to plan B.  They approach Elizabeth West, Simon’s student assistant, lover, and time-traveling sidekick, to try to talk her into doing the job.  They even add one more incentive: if Victor dies, it’s possible that Simon Cross himself will never be born.  How’s that for a temporal paradox?!

    By the way, didn't San Francisco get leveled by a deadly earthquake in 1906, with dozens of deadly fires and hundreds of people killed?

    Coincidence?  I have my doubts.

What’s To Like...
    When The Walls Fell is Book 2 in Monique Martin’s Out Of Time series.  I read the first book back in 2013, its review is here.  Both books are a clever blend of Time Travel and Romance genres, and here there’s a bit of a whodunit mixed in as well.  The council knows when Victor Graham is killed, but not who did the killing and why.

    I like that the time-travel is limited to requiring a special pocket watch and only when there’s a lunar eclipse; it prevents the chrono-hopping from being too convenient.  The Romance element centers around Simon and Elizabeth patching things up after a lovers’ spat.

    The writing style is what I call “storytelling” mode: the emphasis is on moving the plot along without getting bogged down with long descriptions or character depths.  Yet the 1906 setting is still portrayed well; and Elizabeth’s joy ride in an automobile from back then was a memorable experience.  I also liked Monique Martin’s habit of making up words and phrases: “physics-y”, “Jeevesy”, “rococo gone loco”, “great googley moogley”, et. al.  It takes a certain confidence to coin your own expressions in a novel, and here I felt it fit in nicely.

    I thought the book was well-researched for its time period.  Madame Blavatsky gets a brief nod; as does Rachmaninoff.  There’s even a smidgen of Chinese worked into the story, plus a brief discourse about the serious topic of racism, which I thought was quite timely (no pun intended).

     The ending was a mixed bag.  A couple plot twists crop up to challenge our heroes, including a clever one that I didn't see coming for the baddie.  Yet the resolution of the main thread, Victor’s demise, while certainly twisty, didn’t feel very exciting.  Overall, I was expecting Simon and Elizabeth to face bigger challenges than what went down.

Kewlest New Word...
Cheviot (n., but an adj. here?) : the wool or tweed cloth obtained from the Cheviot sheep.
Others: Fatuous (adj.).

Excerpts...
    “She’s found some psychic.  Madame Palianko or Petroika or something equally Russian.  You see my wife’s foibles aren’t just limited to her taste in music.  They’ve somehow managed to venture into the Other World.”
    “Twaddle,” Wentworth said between puffs.
    “Caroline will be seeing spirits for weeks,” Gardiner said, rolling his eyes again.  “Last time we had a medium over she was convinced the ghost of her Uncle Merryweather was trapped in the credenza.”   (loc. 5411.  All locations refer to the three-book bundle from which I read this book)

    “I hate that we can’t change things, and yet, I’m kind of afraid I did.”
    Simon’s eyes narrowed.  “Elizabeth, what did you do?”
    “Nothing, maybe.  Or, maybe, I might have said something that’s sort of responsible for the beginnings of the inklings of the founding of the Temporal Council and the invention of the time traveling watch.”
    “I was gone two hours.”
    She shrugged.  “It was an interesting two hours.”  (loc. 7091)

Kindle Details...
    When The Walls Fell sells for $3.99 at Amazon.  The first book in the series, Out Of Time, is free; the rest of the e-books in the series all sell for $4.99.  You can also purchase the Books 1-3 bundled together for only $4.99.  Monique Martin has a bunch of other books and series available for your kindle, most of which are priced at $3.99, plus a couple of Christmas novellas for $2.99 apiece.

“The Vichy just doesn’t soise like it used to.”  (loc. 4715)
    There are some nits to pick, but most of them are minor.  At one point some extremely potent components are smuggled into a jail and then used to quickly eat through the steel bars on the prison cell.  Ignoring the unlikelihood of successfully slipping these unnoticed past the guard, there’s also the issue of how incredibly fast-acting the concoction was.  I’m a chemist.  Trust me, this doesn’t work in real life.

    There’s only a smattering of cussing in the text, and a couple of rolls-in-the-hay, but nothing lurid.  Despite the tameness, some reviewers weren’t keen on these sex scenes being included.  They have a point, but hey, it’s clearly indicated that these are “Time Travel Romance tales, and those of us who read them only for the Time Travel angle need to suck it up and tolerate the lovey-dovey stuff.

    Finally, for me the storyline seemed to be a bit “loose” in places.  For example, the séance was a high point in the story because it challenges the reader to try to figure out if it's supernatural or a scam.  The evidence was mixed – mysterious wet footprints versus the medium’s known origin.  But I don’t recall this plot thread ever being conclusively resolved.  I also never figured why Maxwell was at times referred to as “The Great Leslie”, nor whether Charles Graham eventually managed to “undisappear”.

    Full Disclosure: I read the last half of When The Walls Fell in a hospital waiting room, so it’s entirely possible that the answers to these plot threads were there, and that I was just too distracted to grasp them.

    5 Stars.  Add 1½ stars if you like the idea of mixing Romance with a Time Travel tale.  Methinks it's an acquired taste that I still haven't gotten used to.

Sunday, February 3, 2013

Out Of Time - Monique Martin


    2010; 296 pages.  Full Title : Out of Time : A Time Travel Mystery.  Book 1 of “Out of Time” series.  New Author? : Yes.  Genre : Romance, Time Travel.  Overall Rating : 5*/10.

    Due to a temporal mishap, Professor Simon Cross and graduate assistant Elizabeth West find themselves transported back to 1929 New York City, just before the stock market crash.  They won’t be able to return to the present for at least six weeks, maybe not at all.  So they better figure out how to make some money and blend in with the crowd.

    In their spare time, they might also want to get to know each other better, since Elizabeth is secretly enamored by the Professor, and Simon is secretly enamored by his grad assistant.  And watch out for vampires.

What’s To Like...
    Let’s clear up any genre confusion – Out of Time is first and foremost a Romance.  Time-Travel is of secondary importance, and Vampirism a distant third.  Despite the title and the Amazon blurb, there is no “Mystery” here.

    The 1929 New York setting has a nice feel to it.  It is obvious that Monique Martin spent some time researching the era, and Simon and Elizabeth are fond of seeing the sights while they wait out the 6 weeks.  That's kewl.

    There is only one chrono-hop, but ANAICT each book in the series will transport our two heroes to a different time, maybe also to a different place.  The mechanics of the time-travel are nicely done, structured in such a way that you can’t just go hopping around willy-nilly.  The story moves at a good pace, without any major slow spots.  The ending ties things up neatly.

    There are weaknesses.  Although the Elizabeth and Simon characters are well-developed, and also the bartender Charlie Blue; all the others are pretty 2-dimensional.  The Vampire is a total waste of time (was it a ploy to nab some of the Twilight readers?), he could have just as easily been cast as a stereotypical 1920’s gangster.

    The romance is overdone.  It seems like every third sentence is used to remind the reader that the two protagonists have the hots for each other, but are too shy or socially-repressed to speak up.  The first kiss is at 38%, it’s not too long after that that they jump into the sack.  This isn’t really a spoiler; you know from the first page that this is gonna happen sooner or later.

Kewlest New Word…
    Sophistry (noun) : the use of fallacious arguments, especially with the intent of deceiving.

Excerpts...
    Charlie patiently taught her what each drink was and, thankfully, she was a quick study.  A Yack Yack was a glass of bourbon flavored with iodine and burnt sugar.  A Panther was whiskey with a touch of fusel oil.  When the bartender asked you to pick your poison, he wasn’t kidding.  (loc. 1621)

    “Where did you learn to fight like that, or am I better off in ignorance?”
    “Daddy.  Thought it was a good idea for me to learn a little self defense.  What about you?”
    “Boarding school.  My first year I learned how to take a punch.  My second, how to give one.”
    “And your third?”
    “That it’s better to avoid them altogether.”  (loc. 4777)

Kindle Details...
    You can download Out Of Time for free at Amazon.  Monique Martin has published three more books in the series; they all sell for $3.99.

“First rule of time travel, my boy.  Always bring your own tea.”  (loc. 5494)
    The premise for Out Of Time is good; and the blending of genres is ambitious.  The problem is the storytelling itself.  You can spot the vampire immediately, and if you’re going to drop such creatures into a novel, there ought to be some mystery about them.  Make some of the characters “gray”; here they are all unchangeably good or evil.

    Most of all, throw some twists into the tale.  With one minor exception at the end, everything here is boringly straightforward.  Make the vampire someone you don’t suspect; give the priest some function beyond offering fatherly advice; “turn” one of the secondary characters with a bite to the neck; throw a 1920’s love interest at one of our heroes; give some plot justification for landing just before the stock market crash.

    It’s hard to give an objective rating for Out Of Time, since Love Stories are not my cup of tea.  Who knows, maybe the Harlequin books my wife reads are also Romance-heavy and Story-light.  5 Stars (out of 10).  Add two more stars if you are looking for a Time Traveler’s Wife type of book, and one star if you actually think Twilight is a good series.