2012; 350 pages. Full Title : “Viele Tausende (Many Thousands), Book One of The Ruthan Analects.” New Author? : Yes. Genre : Fantasy, (sorta). Overall Rating : 3*/10.
What’s To Like...
The
story can be summed up in three words and an acronym : Siddhartha set in
LOTR. There are elves and dwarves
and dragons, and hints of fairies, pixies and Entish creatures to come. And humans, of course. There are some nice descriptions of the lands
that Ruthan travels. Ruthan meets people
and he learns magic. Women of all races
seem to want to help him spread his blood through many generations. No one seems to doubt that Ruthan’s da Man.Viele Tausende will give your vocabulary a workout. Devin Bates will never choose a common word when a longer, more obscure one can be found. Milton would be proud. It gets distracting at times, but it could be worse.
But as a fantasy novel, Viele
Tausende has some serious issues. There are continuity problems, the magic
system is poorly developed, there are lots of unanswered questions (e.g., why does the
horse live so long?), and worst of all – there is zero action.
I
mean none. The closest we get is a
lovers’ spat 2/3 of the way through, where spells are thrown instead of
dishes. Other than that, we get to
listen to Ruthan muse about life, the Universe, and everything else. Frankly, I found our hero/chronicler to be long-winded,
slow-witted, and spoiled.
Kewlest New Word...
Saccade : a rapid movement of the eye between two
fixations points.
Kindle Details...
Viele Tausende sells for $2.99 at Amazon. AFAIK, this is Devin Bates’ only novel thus
far. But in his Amazon blurb, he
indicates this will become a trilogy.
Excerpts...
Men have
wondered for untold ages about the nature and purpose of their existence,
Valéria, but the answer to the mortal condition is really much simpler than we
make it. Love and peace are the great
meaning of our mortal sojourns. A life
is only wasted when it has not been well-lived, and death is nothing for a wise
soul to be afraid of. (loc. 402.
Herman Hesse would be proud.)
“Are you safe, nephew?” I asked Solfallin.
“As
well as can be expected, no thanks to you,” he quipped. “I’m
burning with exhaustion and I reek of sweat and horse shit. Are you safe?” (loc. 4907)
“Of what value is magic ... if a person can’t, or won’t, make
use of it?” (loc. 5712)
It
is difficult to know what the author intended with this book. Readers looking for a fantasy book are going
to be sore disappointed by the lack of action.
As a “Siddhartha” book, it does much better, but a book about spiritual
enlightenment doesn’t blend well with dragons and elves.
I
suspect this was a labor of love, with things like editing and beta-reading
dispensed with. Here’s hoping the next
two books in the series have some excitement infused into them. 3 Stars.
Add another 4 stars if you’ve read Siddhartha,
and liked it.
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