2011; 366 pages. New Author? : Yes. Book 1 (out of 6) in the “Jackrabbit Junction Humorous Mystery”
series. Genres : Romantic Mystery; Humorous
Fiction; Beach Read. Overall Rating : 6*/10.
Claire Morgan is about to experience the longest
month of her life.
She’s agreed to stay with her
grandfather, Harley “Gramps” Ford for the entire month of April. In an RV park somewhere in Arizona, in some
podunk town called Jackrabbit Junction, mostly filled with retirees. Where gray-haired geezers get their biggest daily thrills by watching blue-haired geezerettes sashay up and down the street.
33-year-old Claire would love
to meet some handsome guy her age, as she’s currently unattached. But none seem to live in Jackrabbit
Junction, to no one's surprise. Oh
well, it’s only for a month and come May, she can return to North Dakota having
done her familial duty.
You don’t know it, Claire, but
Jackrabbit Junction holds some deadly secrets, just waiting to be dug up. And we know just the dog who will do the
digging.
What’s To Like...
Dance of the
Winnebagos is the opening volume in Ann Charles’s 6-book “Jackrabbit Junction Humorous Mysteries”
series. The series’ title
notwithstanding, I highly recommend you read this book when you’re in the mood
for a Romantic Mystery tale. More on
that in a bit.
The story is set in the
copper-mining area of southern Arizona, with Tucson being the nearby big city. That resonated with me, since I reside in Arizona, and once upon a time, the company I worked for supplied a number of
chemical products to the copper mines.
The Mystery angle starts right
away. Gramps’s beagle, Henry, digs up a
bone while nosing around in an old mine, and Claire recognizes it as a human
femur. Questions arise immediately. How old is it? Where’s the rest of the skeleton? Will this affect the value of the mine, which
belongs to Ruby, a current Jackrabbit Junction resident, and who is contemplating
selling it for some much-needed debt relief.
That’s a very promising start,
but it takes a back seat to the Romance angle.
Mac Garner, nephew to the mine’s owner and all-around hunk, shows up to
help his aunt determine the maximum worth of her two mines.
Claire and Mac meet, gets the
hots for each other, and a series of misunderstandings and misadventures give
rise to the Humorous angle. If you like
Hallmark Romance movies, you’ll love this plot thread; there’s even a precocious little girl
that every Hallmark movie has.
Supplemental humor comes in the form of Chester and Manuel, two of
Gramps’s Euchre-playing (and women-chasing)
buddies.
The ending is a three-phase
affair. The main mystery storyline
(whose femur is it) is resolved in Chapter 24; and the Romance and Money plot
threads are dealt with in the next, and final, chapter.
“Extras” in the back of the book include “About
the Author”, and “Five Fun Southwestern
Facts about Ann Charles”, both of which I found fascinating to read.
Ratings…
Amazon:
4.3/5
based on 2,320 ratings and 717 reviews.
Goodreads: 3.95/5 based on 3,357
ratings and 473 reviews
Excerpts...
“Are you some kind of freak who plays with
dead animals?”
While most of Claire’s family considered
her to be a few cherries short of a fruitcake, that didn’t mean she had to take
any crap from this kid. She glared at
the girl. “Who are you?”
“I’m Ruby’s kid.”
That explained the hair and freckles. “You have a name?”
“Jessica, but my friends and family call me
Jess.” She batted her eyelashes and
offered Claire a want-to-be-my-friend-too smile. (. . .)
“Thanks for the lemonade, Jessica.” (pg. 23)
Gramps shot Claire a frown. “What did you do now?”
“What?
I didn’t do anything.” Claire
made a last-ditch attempt at playing the ‘I’m-innocent-I-swear’ routine.
“Child, I wasn’t born yesterday. When I walked up here, you two were circling
each other like a pair of hungry hyenas hovering over a hunk of raw meat.”
Claire
sighed. “Couldn’t you compare me to a
prettier animal? A cat would be
nice. Maybe even a swan. Do swans fight?” (pg. 191)
Kindle Details…
Dance
of the Winnebagos sells for $2.99 at Amazon. The rest of the other books in the series are
in the $3.99-$6.99 price range.
Ann Charles has two other e-book series: a 14-volume Deadwood Humorous Mystery (prices range from $2.99
to $7.99); and a 4-volume Deadwood
Undertaker (prices range from $4.99 to $6.99).
If she ever saw Mac
Garner again, she was going to cram her underwear down his throat until he
choked on them. (pg.
351)
There’s a lot of
cussing in Dance of the Winnebagos. I
counted 30 instances in the first 10%, which felt excessive. Sexual innuendos abound, but to be fair,
there was only one "on-screen” roll-in-the-hay, and you can guess who that
involved.
There were quite a few typos,
including lightening/lightning, chords/cords,
queue/cue, florescent/fluorescent, and pouring/poring. Those last two occurred three times
each. Another round of editing would be beneficial.
Plot twists are sparse and Claire’s sussing out of the various mystery questions was more a matter of convenient luck than skillful sleuthing. Character development was blah: you know from
the start who the good guys and baddies are, and that never changes. The Romance and Mystery angles were both
predictable.
The writing style felt like it
needed another round of polishing. A
plethora of literary devices were overused, including excessive similes, music references, cartoons on Claire’s t-shirts,
Claire's craving of cigarettes, amorous thoughts, and the precocious little girl
sassing about her mom’s poor parenting skills.
So, does that mean this was a
terrible book? Not at all. Despite the technical quibbling, Claire and
Mac’s investigations into the mysteries and each other kept me turning the
pages. Dance of the Winnebagos may
not be a deep taleread, but it is an ideal beach/airport read and I plan on reading
at least one more entry in this series to see whether the writing and
storytelling improve. And to see what
else Henry digs up.
6 Stars. One last thing. At one point the word “snogging” finds its way into the text. This is one of my favorite “Britishisms” of all times. Kudos to Ann Charles for using in this story!